MERE XXVIII

Is this some kind of a ball game?
Why are you always praising me these past few days?
Have you eaten something that twisted your tongue?
Sorry but I'm not used to it that I jokily made a face at you,
When you praise me the third time.
But that joke smirk accidentally leads me to the truth that you're just kidding.
Do you think I didn't hear that?
FYI my senses connives just to protect me.
Now it all makes sense to me,
That you ain't that actually serious.
Good thing I found out what you're up to early on.
Thanks to my ears that pricks when I'm in jeopardy.
Tsk! I thought Romeo had already found me but no,
This Romeo is a mere illusion.

Reviews

[natzky]

whoa....traumatic experienced??harhar...
shifting of subject..heheh..teenage poem...love it..yududoy...:)budoy

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and directs words in the poem. When we learn the truth. Best to leave the liar in the dust.
"Good thing I found out what you're up to early on.
Thanks to my ears that pricks when I'm in jeopardy."
No weakness in the poem. I did like the strong ending to the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Seanne Tholltree]

thank u coyote

[CHRIS ANDES]

..that's some kind of tragic, seanne
=]
life's unfair

[Gene Hiccup]

haha, better luck next time dee,, but its good that you were able to know the guy's real intention before you fall for him..your ears saved you from painful heart ache.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I like the last two lines, nice write.