Human Emotions: Anger.

One of many feelings.

Anger.
All he see’s is a flash of red and then he lashes out.
He is fed up with this guys taunts.
He flaunts his biceps as a threat, but he doesn’t take the bait.
He’s so full of hate he just starts flying and swinging his fist.
He is done fooling around with this egotist.
His fist meets flesh

Reviews

[bigfootprint]

Interesting piece, Seanna. You capture the drama of the moment no doubt. I kept looking for deeper insight into motivation and ethical consideration. Was the taunting playful? Was it childish? Was the assault justified, criminal? Was he defending a lady? It is easy to identify with both the taunter and attacker. Still, for the reader to understand the event, the piece needs more than narrative. Have you discovered the rhyming or synonym dictionary? Sometimes it can get you oriented toward hidden meanings behind the fiery emotion. A very readable piece.

[Karmee]

Very interesting read, much enjoyed this write