A Tear of Fire

A Tear of Fire

When summer came in

and a drought of shame faces.

When i cannot face the unforgiving time

Slithering from my sinews

When my face, Faces the crowd

Filling myself with hate and shame

Let me know you 

that ~

My heart beat is blazing

While my face drops a tear of fire

Author's Note

I don't really think this poem is perfect so let me know if there are any errors. I kindly appreciate all of your reviews.

Reviews

[PurpleQuartz]

I really like this! I think there is a great depth and meaning to it! Wonderful writing.

[Zachary Cyrick Addams Nash]

That's why i really like you to review all of my poems. :D