New friend

You walked into the gym to my surprise
I could see the glint in your eyes
You filled the room with your beauty
The way you took off your top was so fruity
So glad we finally spoke
I new going out with you they would be a laugh and joke
A new friend I've found on the way
Surely hope you are here to stay

Reviews

[Anjali]

So sweet and so beautiful! There are some grammatical errors but you seriously have creativity in you, and you have the talent of writing... Just keep writing!