Snow

Landscape Poem

Dissidence falls from the blank white clouds.

Tiny shards of crystal dew intoxicate the night

Forever gliding to their resting place.

Unyielding earth transforms to soft impressionable memories

Dawn breaks and the bond broken, memories lost eternally.

Black rain clouds swarm, choking the visceral God Ra

Perched in the heavens , destroying amateur architecture.

Hello my friend.

Goodbye my friend.

Winter has fallen. 

Reviews

[Patrick]

This is brilliant. Incredible usage of the right words in the right place. Glad I read this

[Eliza Mae]

Very subtle and enjoyable. I love how you mentioned the clouds choke the god Ra. And how true is it that winter is very impressionable? Nice work!