i painted you on a postcard and sent you away to be handled by the gruff men who deliver the mail. in the city seventy starlings made their headlong flight into the cold concrete of the paving stones the impact smashed their tiny beaks crushed their fragile little bones. you came back to me with a dent in your heart lost and alone. i am a fool-- and i gave you a home.
I have re-read this three times, trying to soak in the imagery..this is such a good write, and it seems rather sad and lonely...I think Im going to have to re-read this one yet again, and I bet I'll have a different view upon it.
I love the mystery of this. I love the imagery and the feelings evoked from this creative poem. It is just the sort of poetry I like. it makes me wonder and think. Great work!
True love is so precious and yet, we sometimes need to set it free to see if it will return, to see if it really is meant to be. This hurts and we ache, yearn and wait for it to come back. But when that love finally returns, it's not the same as it used to be...it may be battered, bruised and broken by its journey yet, we gladly open our arms, hearts, receive it back , give it a home once more because we still want, we still need, we stil love - unconditionally...
Such a deep, thought provoking write with vivid imagery and stunning metaphors ...brilliant job SL! :-)
I'm growing out my hair
Like it was when I was single
It was longer than I'd known you
I had no money then
I had no worries then at all
But with such a high standard of living. more..