the lounge

from my mind
i try to find some rest.
sipping drinks from a waitress
as we try not to stare at her breasts.
and i'm the only girl here
who's never had a man between her legs.
or a pole.
i look "so cute"
with my schoolgirl plaits.
but in the next sentence-
"...do you dance?"
maybe i'm just their type.
i wish.
no degradation.
just simple, sexual
sensual
liberation.
the baseness of humanity revealed
in a tiny bra and knickers.
the only real thing i've seen.
(and the girls seem so keen.)

Reviews

[celyn]

This is really, really, perfect.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is such a bold statement for women. I like the stubborn attitude in this one. I think its quite interesting to have the contrast of this observer in this environment. That crack about "The only thing I've seen".....wow..
Now that was just vicious...lol There is a wisdom here, but perfectly camoflauged.