Another, not just

And the tide came

To swallow the dirt

From a past path

That would lead

Me to him

In the shade

Of his branch

A river flows

And snow falls

On his skin

A first feel

A new beginning

I breathe

To let it in

I dare to

Breathe again

Only him

Author's Note

Reviews

[NeiL ArandA]

So many elements used by the author for the entitled muse . Perhaps tide pertains to a second chance in life . Perhaps a wind of change blowing in favor of abereaved longing for a new beginning . Perhaps a river signifies a source of strength and provision where they can both hope and cling for sustenance . A drop of first snow on a bare skin may signifies anew chapter of life that has long been pause and its time to move on and face a change of season . Something that has long been forgotten and the glimpse of snow adear reminder of a tender hope worth looking . Something has ceased living and something had died inside but here its willing to breathe again . This time it's only for him . Perhaps the piece is a love gone cold or a triangle .

[Michelle N. H.]

Just amazing, how you can deal with past, future, and the space in between dear one... this write, is beautiful, and stand on it's own, for it's full of love, care, and happiness. You are such a rich wise, soul, and your words do you honor... beyond fantastic Mi... Love to you!!

[Michelle N. H.]

Thank you so much, Lis. Your words humble me, they always do.. xxxx

You are from another world, Sis... you reach that exact spot, always, when you write. xxx
You are welcome sweet Mi... xxxx

[Wórdsmíth]

So, painful memories of yous you pen down in this write. Very nice poem. I feel the emotions in my heart reading this piece. Beautiful.

[Michelle N. H.]

This piece of writing actually holds quite a positive feel to me, although there is moment of letting go. Thank you, Wordsmith :)

[Sami Khalil]

Soft, gentle and melodious. You unfold from the shade and fold the him in yours...Excellent...:)................

[Michelle N. H.]

Thank you, Khalil.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).........................

[joshua deathdealer]

The imagery presented unfolded so perfectly with the emotions of this poem as I read and was blown away. This is an outstanding piece of art. I also adore the Final Fantasy music that you have chosen to grace this. Wow. xx

[Michelle N. H.]

Gosh. Thank you ever so much, Joshua. I am humbled by your words, truly.. :)

[Sugar Plum ♥]

This is an amazing piece for me. First it`s a brilliant art-work, combining the photo (seems like water colors), with the lovely pink of the tree and the pink ink you used, with the dreamy melody..I love that.
Then your lines, emphasizing and bold, provoking me to read carefully and more than once. It`s very delicate poem, full of past and future mixes and timeless, with sorrow, but hidden. The last lines, the new beginning leaves impression of forgetfulness and need to be alone. But then ...Only him, turns me into the start of the "circle". Memories and pains can`t be erased, but can be used to the way of light...Gorgeous!
I loved these lines:

A river flows
And snow falls
On his skin

{sugar plum}
--June-014 --

[Michelle N. H.]

You made me a beautiful review, and you feel my intention as well. Thank you so much for taking the time, for your lovely words towards my write ^^

[Zilla Z.]

Sometimes in life things happen from past to future, and we have no control over what happens, I believe in true love... in love that "happens". (with no control). That's what I feel here, this is a gentle, and beautiful soft poem written to a loved one, one, that is near, but far, one that is the "future", and the "wholeness what is him" is everywhere and everything around you. It's almost like the beginning of a new season. I love your pen, you have a refreshing and new take on things, and also on human beings Michelle, thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of writing.

Zilla

[Michelle N. H.]

Thank you for stopping by to read this piece, Zilla. You capture me, as if you know my bones and what's past them.. I have my hopes, so I'll be dreaming :)

[Zilla Z.]

You know what they say, of those who dream? they will make it real one day ;) I loved this. And you are very welcome my so talented friend.

[Michelle N. H.]

So I've heard ^^ and the compliment means a great deal coming from someone as talented as you. Thank you kindly.

[Zilla Z.]

Oh you humble me dear Michelle. Thank you so much, but I think you're the talented writer here... ;)

[A. Amos]

Each word perfectly describes the romance... I admire your skills.

[Michelle N. H.]

Thank you, Amos, for visiting and for your words shared.

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my friend, please when ever you post new work kindly send me read request. I truly admire your writing. Thank you

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I really like this; to me it is part romantic and part spiritual… to sum it up in one word, divine.

[Michelle N. H.]

That's quite a remark.. Thank you, Rocker :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are welcome.