At a distance

Faceless

as they pass me

these hearts

that are beating

with a rhythm

affecting mine

before they fade in

the distance of

a blocked direction

Discarded

this heart is

and left behind

In the corner of

fleeting eyes

hope be gasping

for attention

Author's Note

Reviews

[Michelle N. H.]

There is hope in the returning dream, of faceless beings, persons, shapes, shadows, shades....

They are only faceless, because there isn't a light, to reflect their beautiful faces... they are shades, in shy shadowed, hues, for they "chose" to be there... there is a place to go if you really "want" to go, and you were perceiving the right thing, into your dreams, of perception Sister...

Here you felt all, in once, and twice, maybe in whole.
They seem to dance around you and ether of accepting, they maybe try to reach you, but they aren't able too do so, and neither are you, there is a close line or boundery in between, that's invisible of a higher force, but you can see each other, but there is no touch.... a vague and rather dull sound maybe, echoed in hues, untraceable... but silently interesting...

Your quill Sis, once again is highly preformed, shaped, and rarely so good as no one could ever write a short piece of poetry that neat and sharp, as if there are diamonds in Europe found, almost so perfect, they need no work, on them... for being shaped, as sharp as you did just here.

Absolutely interesting, and a great perfection, through each line. Enjoyed this gem, in times of pity here. For it's a colorful mega huge grand lunatic :D spectrum, of reflections -xx-

-Elisa :)

[Michelle N. H.]

Lizzy, you explain this piece in a way I hadn't thought. You dug beyond the deepest end here, and I love it. Thank you, sweet sister, for your kind praise and analysis. You help me understand myself xx

Thank you for writing so beautiful as ever Shelly. :) It's always each time a little present, to have read something from your catalogue. -x- :) You are always welcome!! ((HUG))

[NeiL ArandA]

Elisa Laura said it all. There's nothing else that I could add.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

really so well expressed..The feeling of alienation and loneliness, in one so little world, where you want to catch a hope of other heart. Wonderful picture and music too!

{sugar plum}

[Michelle N. H.]

Thank you, for feeling this one :)

[cloud]

This is a most impressive presentation of words, image and music. You have an eye for artistic writing. I enjoyed stopping by to read this.

[Michelle N. H.]

Thank you, Blue. It means a great deal to me.. I'm glad you stopped by :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A diverse and sated piece that speaks well, good read.

[Michelle N. H.]

Many thanks, Thomas :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Your welcome.

[V. P. Trujillo]

It's all a matter of perception, distance. An illusion made to seem real, in this shared reality we have going on. But it's never really been there, just a way of showing the many differences, uniqueness, and additives, of this beauty, to that beauty, to the next..

[Michelle N. H.]

I resonate with that. One of my favorite minds, you are. Thank you!

[Shaquana Adams]

This poem is very enticing. It pulled me in and kept me reading. Great job! :)

[Michelle N. H.]

Thanks a lot, Shaquana :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is an amazing perception... such a vulnerable voice spoken through your words..
I felt the drowning, the need to be saved.... if only to be seen as you are...
Sometimes they don't realize the fading of a spirit...sad...

A poignant write... thanks for sharing.~xoxo~:)

[Michelle N. H.]

Thank you, Robbie x Your words are so appreciated by me. I am happy you enjoyed this piece of writing ^^

[PoemRodent]

Your words and style left me feeling what you were writing. However, and this is just me I felt dropped at the end and wanting more. I am creepy that way. Overall I enjoyed your write. Thanks for sharing.

[Michelle N. H.]

Thank you very much. I am glad you did like it, and felt my words :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

So many people want to turn their heads from problems of this world like homelessness and pretend it don't exist. That kind of behavior has put humanity on life support.

Love the poem by the way.

[Michelle N. H.]

Yeah, it's easier to ignore a stranger's aches than take action and be of assistance. Thank you for stopping by :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

It was my pleasure to do so.