This is my favorite piece! So strongly connected I feel with it...It`s like pieces of puzzle, organized to be combined, and prepared, it`s like very gentle and soft love song, memory and feeling about the future. Something sad is hidden behind the words, as if a distance, and longing for closeness...But that also preserves the real love and moment so fresh. Its amazing. My favorite :
My mirror
My reflection
My other half
Complete my heart
And make it beautiful
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
I'm real happy you like this one, and I can tell that you truly feel it, so thank you :)
This is my favorite piece! So strongly connected I feel with it...It`s like pieces of puzzle, organized to be combined, and prepared, it`s like very gentle and soft love song, memory and feeling about the future. Something sad is hidden behind the words, as if a distance, and longing for closeness...But that also preserves the real love and moment so fresh. Its amazing. My favorite :
My mirror
My reflection
My other half
Complete my heart
And make it beautiful
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
I'm real happy you like this one, and I can tell that you truly feel it, so thank you :)
I like this thought... Few have the patience to wait. Life pulls us aside and puts us in a box. Duty finds us and cements us to where we fall... Yes, take care of who you are, because the one who loves you most will want this for you. Even if you never meet in this lifetime.
I am flooded with emotion as I read this Michelle.
You have penned a tender thought yet you have made a courageous proclamation here as well.
I guess I am trying not to believe in a "soul mate"... it works better for my realities. ha. I have found many souls who more perfectly reflect and compliment my soul than I could have imagined in my youth...
For now, I must believe we learn to be better souls mates and compliment lives as we are given the opportunities in life.
Still, it is a romantic thought you pen and one I would love to live the truth of...
Heavenly write!
I imagine that a soul mate does not have to be a lover, that he or she can appear as a dear friend t.. read moreI imagine that a soul mate does not have to be a lover, that he or she can appear as a dear friend too and nothing else. I personally believe it is possible to have more than just the one as well, but that it generally is the most intimate relationship we have a craving for to feel whole, when in fact we already are on a greater scale.. Thank you, David, for taking the time to read and comment on my poetry, and then with such lovely words! I am so pleased you like this write :)
10 Years Ago
Yes! I have this experience in my life... I think we understand each other.
This piece has me stuck in a deep thought of wonder.
I place myself in the position of your love, and I can feel
This person say:
I find no words, I find no courage..
I find no strength to tell you how long
I've waited for you to notice me.
I find no flaw in the mystery of your
desires.
This is truly my favorite.
Like the missing end of "It's wearing thin"
This is intense!
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10 Years Ago
I had a feeling you'd review this piece if you were to come by, and I am happy you did. Those statem.. read moreI had a feeling you'd review this piece if you were to come by, and I am happy you did. Those statements of yours are without doubt woven in between the lines of mine. Thank you so much for your thoughts shared, for feeling my words and for digging further, beyond what's written :)
Ah! I know, I know, your squirming in the memories of "Prince Neon" but dear, you gotta wait for "Neon" cause sorry, we can't meet yet because I want to become a celebrity first so, hope yeah, "Until We Meet" you would want to wait! Ha! (Kidding)
O' yeah, yeah, don't be silly, I know, your mad at "Prince Neon!" n as you know very well, "Neon" hates seeing someone as beautiful as you feel sad damn bad by any reason! So, to make some blushes on an angelic face, Neon says, "Michelle" now lives into the heart of him "Until We Meet!" Don't worry, after meeting, Neon won't throw you outta his heart, you'd always be in his heart!
By the way, "Neon" loves when angels squirming into his memories! See! What a hot "Neon" he is, he can burn every angelic thing!
Nevermind!
Yeah, this's a very beautiful love lasting a heart beating song that's well penned into the scented words of an angel. All the memories, the love, Romantic moments ((Whao! My heart's beating!Noww)), happiness, the feeling of love when heart beats fast to see the presence of love n everything you've well poured into the drops of words with the fragrance of yours! Keep on!
Yeah, 101/100!
You always in the depth of my heart!
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you muchly for your keenness towards my write, Neon. I greatly appreciate it.
A beautiful definition of love, your words and expressions are simply marvelous.... took me into different world where really love do exist.. world need more poet like you, as you can portray beautiful colors of love.. brilliant..
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10 Years Ago
What a lovely comment, too flattering for me. Thank you so much, Amos :) I'm smiling.
I couldn't have worded this any better myself. She's there...no shes here, I just haven't met her yet. Absolutely beautiful! I love your "about," paragraph too. We share many similar traits...But yes, true love indeed is the core!
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10 Years Ago
Thank you so much :) I'm really pleased you stopped by.
I'm Michelle. To strangers I may seem reluctant, but I'm really quite open towards those that are patient and genuinely interested in getting to know me. I think a lot. I'm hardly ever bored. I've.. more..