To see you happy

To see you happy

A Poem by Michelle N. H.

For all the wrong you did, I will make amends

For all the hurt you caused, I will take your defense

To see you happy with someone else

I'll stay quiet and let you live

A life that's better than the one I could give

 

Contrary to before, you now know she means more

Let me be the last of your mistakes towards her

To see you happy

© 2015 Michelle N. H.


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I havent seen nor heard this before. To be willing to love and let go of someone for the greater good and best interest of others is not only sacrificial but a love at its highest level . I said this for many succumbed to bitterness and resentments . And while others are willing to take many with them when they go down . This kind is willing to lift someone up . Like a tender hand holding up a bird in her palm urging it to fly and to be free . Is it really worth our thousand tears to have loved and failed than have not love at all . But to see someone happy and free I think we you so see ... is love at its highest level .

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I havent seen nor heard this before. To be willing to love and let go of someone for the greater good and best interest of others is not only sacrificial but a love at its highest level . I said this for many succumbed to bitterness and resentments . And while others are willing to take many with them when they go down . This kind is willing to lift someone up . Like a tender hand holding up a bird in her palm urging it to fly and to be free . Is it really worth our thousand tears to have loved and failed than have not love at all . But to see someone happy and free I think we you so see ... is love at its highest level .

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Real love is letting go, as you so well understand it, pure, selfless, giving, a real beautiful soul you are, this one not needed much of deeper meaning, than a few words, of you, and me say here... x "Strong YOU"
Beautiful short piece of the core.

- Elisa

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

10 Years Ago

Always, dear one... there is no place for sadness in my world, sometimes I can be silent, or just tr.. read more
Michelle N. H.

10 Years Ago

It really is, once you realize x

10 Years Ago

Yes, it is.... there is nothing in the end, than to be happy for another. So it makes you happy too .. read more
ahh, the beauty of letting go and moving on. Its a courageous act if a person does this, that's the greatest gift you could give yourself. Great and well expressed.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

10 Years Ago

Thanks, captain! :) Sometimes the hardest decision merely is the right one to make.
captain

10 Years Ago

so true, and you're most welcome :)
This is beautiful Michelle...your heart must be so warm and giving.
It takes a lot for someone to step aside because they love that person.
You are a precious gem in a field of rocks.
Really enjoyed this a lot.
Beautiful giving within you....priceless
Scott

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

10 Years Ago

Wow, thank you, Scott. That's such a compliment.
Scott Metro

10 Years Ago

...and it is the truth...there are so many cold hearts out there...you are like a little ember of wa.. read more
what magnanimous sentiment, it tore my heart to pieces… this is the essence of love, when we can let go with no hard feelings and still truly wish them the best. Beautiful and mature.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

10 Years Ago

Aw, thank you loads :)
This one held a lot of thought... and kept me here for a bit.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

10 Years Ago

I'm glad it had such an affect. That's really nice..
Chris

10 Years Ago

dealing with life ...is a world renowned habit.
really good write here...in theme as i address it, reminds me a bit of cheryl crow's --"you're my favorite mistake"

i can see the speaker having this wish...even though she understands the hurt he caused her...and that their relationship was not for him...she hopes she might be his favorite mistake...

and now she has forgiven him the pain...and hopes that with this someone new...he might find his love renewed...

jacob

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

10 Years Ago

We all want to be remembered, to have left a positive impact on the ones we've come to care for. Tha.. read more
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MAC
took me years to understand forgiveness....wish I had read this 20 years ago. amazing

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Mark! I'm flattered.
MAC

10 Years Ago

happy to flattered you Miss Michelle :)
Michelle N. H.

10 Years Ago

:) Always honored to have you stop by.
A protective write filled with genuine feeling of love. Loved it :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Michelle N. H.

10 Years Ago

I'm pleased! I thank you for the words.

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Added on December 2, 2013
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Tags: life, mistake, letting go, amends

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I'm Michelle. To strangers I may seem reluctant, but I'm really quite open towards those that are patient and genuinely interested in getting to know me. I think a lot. I'm hardly ever bored. I've.. more..

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