Sunrise

Sunlight fractures in bright rays and rests on your skin

Underneath an indigo sky to sprinkle life once again

Nature draws a smile for the birth of another dawn

Regret not what went before says thou by way of song

In the light persists forever where one cannot do wrong

Sense all as all is whilst you ascend from sleep

Eternal love is you and so eternity is yours to keep

Author's Note

Reviews

[NeiL ArandA]

Acrostic Poetry ... is like an archer . Its all line up and dead center . Not much to say here . Elisa Laura I have known so well . I call here Seamless . She as well as you write and weave seamless verse and flows like prestine crystal clear stream ..

[Michelle N. H.]

Sigh.... and another one. :) How beautiful it is, to feel a sunrise, and even the rays of light on your skin... we in the North, are too often in grey hues, and shades... so the Sun when he's out, makes it super special each time... we really treasure his light...and the circle in this beautiful acrostic piece goes, down, and will be reborn again, into another deja-vu.... of a new bright day. I love your old English here, it gives a atmosphere of the forlorn beauty, and ancient times, we hold so near, to our hearts, it's the simplicity of beauty I read here, and of "being" for it continues on a natural way... each day, each year, for ages... yes, eternal, beautiful ending, it's soooo eternal, sister... thank you for spreading your talent on this page, and leave your beautiful heart.... in ink :)

- Elisa

[Michelle N. H.]

I love reading what you get out of my scribbles, because you see within and beyond. Thank you for such an amazing review, Lis x

The pleasure is all mine Shell... you are a gifted writer... I am addicted to your work! :) anytime, will come by for more! -x- :)

[Michelle N. H.]

It means a lot. You know I admire your writing much :) I'll be back for yours also x

Take all your time, my writings will be hanging in here, like weightless particles of nothingness... ;) until someone as you will feel what they mean :) my sweet friend :) -x-

[Michelle N. H.]

No rush ever, yeah x

Never dear... we have our own time always, p.s. this music brings me to a music box dance, from another time.... :) forgot to tell you, how good your taste is.... :)

[Michelle N. H.]

Thank you so much, Lizzy ^^ We merely have the same ears.

Hah! Shell true that! ♫ :D my eclectic Sis...... ^^

[Laura Harrison]

This is perfect, a wonderful write :)

[Michelle N. H.]

Wow, many thanks :)

[Sioranth Smith]

This is so pretty (and I'm not just saying that because you chose to use Chrono Cross in the background ;) ). My favorite line was "Underneath an indigo sky to sprinkle life once again" because it really breathed renewal and just the freshness of the dawning day.

[Michelle N. H.]

Thank you so much :) I picked the music almost specifically for that line actually. I thought the image of sprinkling life would go well in hand with the twinkling sounds of "Dream Fragments".

[Emrick]

Nice creativity. all letters stood out tall. very nice.

[Michelle N. H.]

Thank you, emrick!

[Matt DeFranco]

Inspiring...I should read it every sunrise.

[Michelle N. H.]

:) It happens to be my first attempt at pulling together an acrostic poem, so I'm thrilled there are people who find it any good.

[Neon]

Wahhh .. what a cool fullform of sunrise .. lol I loved it. Your cool .. am gonna give ya 100/100. Keep on.

[Michelle N. H.]

I love your excitement, haha. That's very kind, thank you so much :)

[Neon]

Wow! Me too just seeing someone as beautiful as you love seeing my excitement and feel happy and make smile in the face to make the world more delight and peaceful living.
Thanks for "haha" .. I loved your "haha" It made my day!

[Michelle N. H.]

Two weeks later, that's brilliant, hah. Have a good one, Nèon :)

[Neon]

Ha!
Opps! Sorry!

But am glad to hear a word by an angel "BRILLIANT" .. and by the way, i again love your "hah" ;)
Ha!

Have a beautiful day, pretty :)

[Antonio Valentino]

awww how great to acknowledge our amazing star in this way..

you've made her so proud she's beaming in my windows right now

lovely
Antonio :)

[Michelle N. H.]

Haha, that's so sweet :) Thanks, Antonio!

[Antonio Valentino]

you're very welcome Michelle :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A positive and beauty poem. I like the use of the word SUNRISE. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Michelle N. H.]

Thank you. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this :)