Morning

A song I'm working on

What if I told you that that morning caught me blind

with my head on your chest,

she asked you "who ya, who ya layin' with?"

without skipping a breath you said no one at all.

Guess I'm no one at all

What if I told you X3

3am and you said you'd do me right and you tried your best

you tried your best

3:15 and I couldn't find a beat and I asked, "who ya, who ya think you're f****n' with?"

What if I told you X3

12pm you looked into my eyes, well you made it work

told me that your heart had ties and most of them to me

yeah, you could make it work

you could make it work.

What if I told you X3

That I don't love you.

Author's Note

It is what it is, simple chord progression and emo lyrics :)

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I like the role reversal in this poem. She's not just spending her time trying to win him over.
Its strange how a guy can say one dumb thing and screw everything up. He should have been
honest on the phone.

I would recommend a Minor Chord Progression. But a Major chord progression would work as well.

Minor-- Makes the song sad, sincere, and makes his words sound like lies and your words sound true
Major--would still make the song sad...but would probably put tension in your words and make u sound
like you may be lying, or unsure of what you want.
Example: *I'm not Angry...* Sing that on a Major and it sounds true...Use it on Minor it sounds like a lie

You have a ton of options in this song. I like it!

[Satellite Heart]

I like this. Great Work. Simple and shot up with emotion.

[Eagle Cruagh]

Simple progression is right .
It progressed right up to the
point where you finally admit,
"I don`t love you".

Interesting construction and well
articulated. This is also cute and
meaningful.

Rate---- 100 %

----- Eagle Cruagh