Relapsed Cycle

Fire
And burning
Heat
Heads turning
Smolders
And ash
Band-Aid
And gash
Tears
And pain
New rules
New game
Smiles
And pleasure
Happiness
Forever
Thoughts
And mirrors
Old wonderings
Old fears
Hesitant
Slow
Small fire
Small glow
Lurid dreams
Bigger flame
New fire
Old game

Reviews

[Amanda J. S.]

Great... How long have you been writing poems? :-)

[Nicole]

thanks :) i think i started in middle school. i needed to escape from everything, and found solace in poetry.

[Amanda J. S.]

Great :-)

[Harley (arbiter)]

Its different and I liked it! An awesome piece. I may be kinda slow but is it about someone first falling in love? That's what I got from some of it. Great job though

[Nicole]

it's actually interesting that you said that, because the intention was for it to be about an addicition. y'know, when you swear you're off for good, only to come back? but first love works with it too. that's kinda funny, actually.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Ah well that reminds me of "down in a hole" by alice in chains. It was like that. It was about a addiction / love aswell. Lol

[Nicole]

i suppose love can be an addiction too. i've known boys like that, where i kept coming back despite the consequence.

[Harley (arbiter)]

I've also known some gals like that