Goodbye

I couldn't leave

The word 'goodbye'
I know what it means
I've said it many times before
Only to return soon with a 'hello'

To walk away
I know how that feels
I've tried to move on
Only to run back to say 'hello'

Making choices
I know the dilemma
I've done what's right though
Only to apologise after and cry 'hello'

The word 'goodbye'
I know what it means
To walk away
I know how that feels
The day 'you' made that choice.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Those damn goodbyes. They leave us with wishes of more hellos. Nice flow of thoughts led to honest ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Scrap]

Thank you.

Well, the goodbye made me write. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Most times. The bad days make the best poetry.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

goodbyes are so painful...i feel that in this poem...the frustration and sadness...but then there are the hellos on the other end...reminds me of the Beatles..."you say goodbye, and i say hello, hello hello"

[Scrap]

Thank you. Goodbye's are painful especially when ure not the one wanting to say goodbye.

[Solar]

Another word for goodbye is farewell - and it this poem fares so well !

[Scrap]

Thank you.

[Woody]

really nice. so much longing. why can't we just move on? that is a dilemma.
another good one Scrap. you're on the right path I think.

[Scrap]

I think evolution went quicker than moving on when love is lost. :P :(
Ty

[J. J. Nightingale]

Welcome to WC ...

I can relate.....

Jazz..

[Scrap]

Thank you.

:( that u can relate. Painful

[J. J. Nightingale]

You are welcome..............................

[andrew mitchell]

love the way this reads, love the narrative style. well done scrap

[Scrap]

Thank you. :)

[Cathy Wattam]

Welcome to WC! Nice poem Scrap. Perhaps the title 'Goodbye' would be simpler? Just a suggestion though. Keep writing :)

[Scrap]

Thank you Cathy.

I agree. But there are so many 'goodbye's....hence this choice.

[Cathy Wattam]

True, there may be many other 'goodbyes', but they may not be as nice as yours!

[Scrap]

That's really nice of you. I made the change. Btw...strangely you taught me a life lesson there too.

[Cathy Wattam]

Thanks. A life lesson learned is good. I like the name Scrap too but your writing is definitely not!

[JayceeC]

I think most poets write at least one goodbye poem. Some off us have multiples. That feeling when you are left behind I'd a hollow one.
Welcome to the site!

[Scrap]

Thank you. I started writing coz of 'goodbye'. :(

[JayceeC]

Sorry that this is a now thing. It sucks. I dislike goodbyes so much that my friend use "Goodbye for now" or a version of "see you later" with me.
However, breakups spurn some very good poetry. It's very therapeutic, and you get to meet great people.

[Scrap]

Hugs........