Lucky Dog

Run around

You lucky dog

Without a care

In the world

 

Sleep around

You lucky dog

Without a care

In the world

 

Sniff, sniff

Sniff them lady dog

Asses

Woof!

 

You lucky dog.

Reviews

[Valorie J. Shearer]

Very cute, and clever! Take care~~~

[Writer CW Kirkland]

While this poem could be offensive to some, I thought it was well written. It will probably only appeal to a specific audience, but that does not mean it is not a good poem. The flow is smooth and easy to read, and it has a blunt message. Thank you for sharing your writing on the Cafe, and I look forward to reading more in the future.