The Passion

The Passion

A Poem by Jamie
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a touch of passion

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THE PASSION


Mind and body overtaken by need and desire,
Thoughts of everlasting love and togetherness;
To touch, to sense, to smell, to taste, to aspire;
Sexuality and companionship engulfed as one.

To hold you, hug you, smell you, touch you,
Fingers entwined in your hair, our lips meet tenderly;
Mouths open, tongues do battle without further ado
Hands roam and caress the skin, softly, gently.

Passion builds on heated sensual touch,
The flame of desire burns within the soul;
Your heart pounds a rapid beat, wanting to burst,
Sensual tingling encapsulates your primal lust.

Two bodies locked in torrid writhing sensuality,
Conjoined in a sweat soaked sexual frenzy;
Breath leaves shallow, guttural moans escape
Orgasmic crescendo forces both to the brink.

The deed is over, both relieved collapse,
Love’s intimate desire, two become one;
Bodies relax, hearts slow, breath flows normal
Separation begins, one become two, passion done.

© 2008 Jamie


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I really loved how you progressed this writing. It ends differently than I would have expected after reading the begining, and then the ending separately from the rest.

"Mind and body overtaken by need and desire,
Thoughts of everlasting love and togetherness;"

"Bodies relax, hearts slow, breath flows normal
Separation begins, one become two, passion done."

But alas, if only it could last forever! I like surprises. Very nice writing!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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