Simple Pleasures

Simple Pleasures

A Story by Dollface
"

An emotion I've always felt and could never express before writing this haiku.

"

 

            Simple Pleasures
 Blood tears through my veins,
 my senses are all alight.
 You just spoke my name.

© 2009 Dollface


Author's Note

Dollface

Ahh... The simplicity of love... Why must it be so complicated?

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Simple, but prodigious.

Posted 15 Years Ago


So few lines but packs a beautiful meaning as if it were pages. Very beautiful piece.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Priscilla !

There, no one can compare with the person who
made your senses all alight, but I have to agree that
it is a beautiful name and you should be pleased
to hear it.
I think your little poem is interesting, cute and a
pleasure to read. It is amazing .

Thank you for the pleasure.

------ Eagle Cruagh

Posted 15 Years Ago


Love should be this simple. Although, if it were, I think it would not be so cherished as it is. Love is something that can change lives and perspectives and feelings. It is fitting that love is complicated.

But the feeling of a lover speaking your name is like a little piece of nirvana.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Dollface
Dollface

Los Angeles, CA



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Hello! My name is Priscilla and I live in California. I am seventeen years old and I really love writing. Strangely enough, I didn't discover my love of writing as early as most writers-.. more..

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