FINISHED

I'm ending the agony.

 

Finished

   

Finally, the chains are broken.

I can breathe without your pressure at my throat.

Never did I even

Imagine the joy I’d have without having to

Shudder every time you looked my way.

Hatred is the only thing you gave me when I used to be

Everything to you. Consider us

Done.

Author's Note

Again, just a poem I wrote when I needed to take a break from narrative. I seem to enjoy writing about powerless/powerful povs. I picked a word and just started writing a poem from there. It was interesting, trying to choose just the right words and still have to fit within a limit.

Reviews

[Orlando Murcia]

Good riddens!

Ya when you get to a point of no longer putting up with s**t
that's when you give them you give them the boot

Great write
Very well written with anger

Orlando M

[Flo_writer]

Well written. You couldn't have chosen a better last word to end it with. Felt the power of this message, and was inspired by the escape.

[Anastasia Starlena]

This was an amazing piece. Sometimes one must break free in order to restore their individuality and be the person they were meant to be. Awesome poem.

[[untitled]]

a powerful acrostic poem well written

[visions of doom]

tis a powerful poem none the less , the feeling put into it made it come alive , well done you , be prud of yourself .

[Katchzen]

Hm. Wow. Leaving "Done." to it's own line at the end really gives it emphasis, and makes for a great last line.

[Call me Jane]

This kindda reminds me of a book that i have read. Great write XD

[Eagle Cruagh]

I love your style.

Can`t wait to read a lot more of
your poetry.

Thank you!

----- Eagle Cruagh