The SneilaA Chapter by Steven SchroeckChapter 7 The Sneila
The Taqar almost floated away twice
on its transport to Esab. The first time, the Sneilian
carrying the Taqar and another Sneilian accidentally bumped into each other,
causing the Taqar to dislodge from the Sneilian’s claws and start to float off.
It caught it and returned to the travelling pack. The second time, the pack
traversed into a small meteor belt. The Sneilian carrying the Taqar was
blindsided by a meteor, the Taqar came loose, and if it hadn’t been for the
Sneilian next to it that got hit in the face, it would have been lost forever. When they approached Esab, their
metallic wings produced a force field around their bodies and they flew through
the atmosphere and back home. They landed back at the king’s
palace, ready to present him the Taqar as his prized possession. He had tried
for years to get the Taqar, the Anerians’ most valuable possession; now that he
was about to possess it, he could then launch a surprise attack on the Anerians
and force them to be Sneilians’ slaves. When the transport convoy returned,
the king stood as a smirk crossed his face. “Good,” he said as they approached.
“I can smell victory already.” As the Sneilian convoy entered
through the large doors of the palace, one Sneilian in the convoy got jealous
of the one carrying the Taqar. If I am
the one who brings the Taqar to the King, then I will reap all the benefits of being a hero to all of Esab, he
thought. He sped toward the Sneilian in front carrying the Taqar, and crashed
full force into him. The Taqar fell toward the floor of the palace, and the
jealous Sneilian raced for it. The King, as he watched his prize fall to its
destruction, sprouted his metal wings out of the side of his armor and flew to
its rescue. He had to fly through a chaotic swarm of Sneilians, flying about,
trying to catch the Taqar. The King was ruthless is his efforts to reach it. As
he neared it, he retracted his wings and dove through the air toward it. He
almost had it in his hand, but the Sneilian who knocked it loose in the first
place bumped into the King, sending him sprawling against the wall. He didn’t
see the Taqar crash to the floor, but he certainly heard it. When it crashed to
the floor, there was a powerful wind that entered the palace. But it wasn’t
through a window: it was coming out of the Taqar. The pages flipped through,
almost completely tearing out. Every Sneilian was being sucked towards the
Taqar, like it had its own center of gravity. The King was the closest to it,
so he was almost next to it. He knew that he had to shut the book in order to
save himself and all of his minions. When he got within an arm’s distance, he
reached out and shut the Taqar. Immediately, every Sneilian, including the
King, stopped in their place. But the chaos didn’t stop. One of the Sneilians across the
throne room was on fire. One of the fire canisters on the wall (it was
basically a small candle behind a glass box on the wall) fell off the wall and
on top of the Sneilian. He was now running around. They tried to stop him, but
before they could, he ran out the palace doors and floated off into space. He
didn’t have his flight suit activated, so he exploded in an icy chunk. The
doors were shut and the King let his anger out. “Doesn’t anyone in this room have a
brain?” He slammed his fist on the arm rests of the throne, and the entire
palace shook. “I’ve been trying for years to get my hands on this book, and my
chance was almost ruined by YOU!” He pointed his talon at the Sneilian that
caused the chaos. “You caused all of this to ensue. So explain to me,” he said
as he walked back to his throne and sat down, “why you would even think of
doing such a thing?” The Sneilian, named Sulawesi,
stepped forward feebly. “Well sir, I was just… I was trying to be the one to
bring you the Taqar myself. I tried taking it from Chironax-“ “You know that you would have reaped
the benefits even if you weren’t the one who brought it to me personally,” the
king said rising to his feet. He began walking towards Sulawesi. “But now after
what you have done, I have no choice but to punish you. Since you are a
commander of the Sneilian army, and even though I thought I could trust you,”
the king said in a somber but serious tone. He was now face to face with
Sulawesi. “You shall be put to death for the crimes of dishonor and
insubordination. Take him away.” Guards flew beside Sulawesi as he stood in
utter shock. They carried him away to the torture chamber, and the massive
doors shut behind them, the screaming of Sulawesi still heard. The King returned to his throne and
the palace was silent for the next hour. ••• The torture chamber was the epitome
of the word “rotten.” The walls were cracked and covered in all sorts of
mosses, vines, and the occasional acid bubble seeping through a crack. The
prison cells were dank, and all the prisoners were sleeping as it was nighttime
on Esab. As the guards marched Sulawesi down the corridor through the center of
the rows of cells, a prison cell could be heard being opened. Sulawesi gazed
down the small row to the end, where he saw two guards pick a dead body up out
of one of the cells. As he walked by, he thought he faintly heard one guard
say, “He was completely healthy two days ago. Wonder what happened...” A knot
formed in his stomach. But that wasn’t the only thing
forming. They group marched to the end of the
long corridor and came upon a set of gates. One guard walked up to the door’s
keypad on the side, and almost simultaneously, the other guard spun Sulawesi
around. Everything was quiet in the prison, and Sulawesi didn’t want to stare
into the guards eyes. So he closed his. The guard spun him back around as
the other guard opened the two doors to the torture chamber. Now, at first sight, one would never
guess that this place was a place for torturing and killing rebels and
insubordinates (like Sulawesi). It was a giant glass dome with a single stake
in the middle. Outside, you could see outer space. But it was when one looked around
the edge of the dome that the word “torture” came into play. Over to the right, near the edge of
the dome, same a set of gallows. Around it were piles of dead bodies that
looked like they had been sitting there for hundreds of millennia (either that
or the green stuff on the bodies was leaves to try and cover the bodies up). As
they walked toward the stake, Sulawesi looked to the other side and saw an even
more horrific sight: a building with smoke coming out of a chimney. And the
worst part: there were creatures going into the building, being led by chains
and handcuffs. Sulawesi almost stopped, but one guard nudged him forward
saying, “Keep moving, Sula.” They brought Sulawesi to the stake
and threw him at it, causing him to lose his balance and stubble headfirst into
the stake, making him dizzy. He lay sprawled out on the ground, seeing stars
(literally). He lay there, wondering what was going to be done to him. He saw the whip at the last second. This was no ordinary whip either. It
was more of a sword, except much longer and more elastic. It had the hilt of a
sword, but the rest of it was a leather strap with half metal spheres
protruding from its surface. So when it made contact, it came along with
searing pain. It came down with a CRACK, right on Sulawesi’s bare skin,
where the armor didn’t cover. Sulawesi bent into a V-shape, grunting in pain as
more blows rained down on him. One guard stood him up against the stake. The
other kept whipping away. By that time, Sulawesi’s plan had
formed. He endured three more whips, then
lashed out with incredible speed and grabbed the whip inches from his face,
without looking. He yanked it from the grasp of the guard, and flipped it so he
was grabbing the handle instead of the head. He spun wicked fast, whipping the
whip towards the guard’s feet. It grabbed hold, and Sulawesi threw him into the
pile of dead bodies by the gallows. He turned to the other guard and stared at
him with an evil glare. He sprouted his mechanical wings, and the guard knew he
was in trouble. He tried to outrun Sulawesi, but he was too slow. Sulawesi
whipped it around his neck and yanked up, tightening it. He turned to exit, but
the doors had been shut. He flew to them, and much to his dismay, they were
locked. He closed his eyes again, remembering the sounds the buttons made when
the guard pressed them the first time. He made sure he knew them, and went up
to the box and typed in the code. The sirens went off. Sulawesi was sure that he had it
right. He tried it again, but it failed. The guard tried to say something, but
Sulawesi choked him up. The doors burst open in front of him, and the Special
Ops Sneilians ran to surround Sulawesi. There was no exit. But maybe if- His thought was interrupted as a
loud booming voice came from behind the wall of Sneilians. It was the King. “Sulawesi, you have caused more
trouble in an hour than I’ve ever experienced here in 365 years as King! If-“ The King stopped midsentence to look
at Sulawesi as he broke through the wall of Sneilians to look at him. The perfect time to strike. While the King was talking, Sulawesi
was untangling the whip from around the guard’s neck and preparing it for his
attack on the King. A very gutsy move. As the King broke through the
circle, he immediately saw a whip coming straight for him. It made contact, but
it coiled around his neck and Sulawesi pulled tight. He fired up the jet
blasters in his metallic wings and flew for the small hole at the top of the
glass. He looked down at the Special Ops Sneilians coming after him. He halted.
“Hey!” They all stopped in their tracks. “Take another step and your King gets
blown to bits in space.” The Sneilians all lowered to the ground. ‘That’s what
I thought,” Sulawesi said. And with that, he dropped the King from 100 feet up.
The Sneilians below formed a
trampoline with their wings (which must have hurt the King at least a little
bit), and they caught him without him bursting to bits. Sulawesi, in the meantime, seized
the opportunity to escape. He opened the hatch and flew out, closing it behind
him. The King recollected himself and
looked through the glass as Sulawesi flew off into space. He recognized the
direction: the way they had come from stealing the Taqar. The King immediately
turned on his heels and started to quickly walk out of the chamber. An officer
questioned him, asking, “Your highness, what is that matter?” The King stopped and straightened.
He spun slowly around with a face that looked red and hot with anger. “What’s
the matter?” he said. “WHAT’S THE MATTER!? I’ll tell you what the matter is!
One of my former commanders just let me fall 100 feet to my death, and now is
flying off into space! And the direction he is flying can only mean one thing:
that he is going to Anera, previous home of the Taqar, which caused all the
chaos this evening! So I would say that’s a pretty big matter!” He turned to walk out again, and
Chironax questioned, “What does this mean sir?” The king turned and said, “This
means war.” © 2014 Steven Schroeck |
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Added on July 29, 2014 Last Updated on July 29, 2014 AuthorSteven SchroeckCincinnati, OHAboutI am a junior in high school an an aspiring author. I'm currently in the process of writing my first novel. more..Writing
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