1) Repugnant Reaper

This is my first poem I wrote after being inspired by a friend who was digusted with love because someone marred it for her.

Despicable
That's what you are
Running around smashing
Smearing feelings
As if they were disposable
You leave a bad taste in my mouth
I've never met you
But I know exactly who you are
You don't deserve the power
Delinquent

Author's Note

I hope you were inspired by my work. I am open to all criticisms.

Reviews

[Anna Leigh]

I'm in love with this, hits very close to home. It flows so beautifully and your word choice is great! id love to hear whatever you plan to write next!

[Marshall Schoth]

I'm so glad that my writings can relate to others. I've got plenty more in store :)

[John Elridge Medlin]

The flow on this is pretty good. Youconvey the betrayal and disgust well. Good work.

[Marshall Schoth]

Appreciate it my brother!