Empty

little can be big

in my hands

i hold

nothing

Reviews

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Ahhh...this takes me places and it would be too much to write here. It's wonderful!
Here are some of my thoughts - I love this -
Your hands being physical cannot hold the things that are indeed precious yet invisible. Also, they hold nothing because we can take nothing seen with us when we die, and we cannot "hold" or "hold onto" anything. I'm not going to go on and on but there is so much more brimming up from just your 6 words!

[w]

Thank you ... It is definitely a piece that inspires reflection upon many things. It is simple and yet so complex. I wrote it a while a go and debated on ever using it because I feared it would be taken as a simple set of words that was nothing more than a distraction from "real" writing.

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Funny how our internal critic can mess us up sometimes...well, with me often. This really is incredible. Glad you posted it.

[Corset]

Then there is plenty of space in which to fill it with love :) (cheesy but i couldn't resist) nice one W. :)

[Alm]

You gave me so much to think about. Nothing is the opposite of everything, and somehow, I think of what those hands could hold. The possibilities and impossibilities. And just, wow. Little is big. Just this can give me days and days worth of thought.

-Alm

[Falling Leaf.]

Says so much in so little! First one sees the picture of some empty hands. Then one pictures a life of chaos and emptiness. Well done!