Forgotten Title

I have forgotten more than I ever knew I knew if I knew it at all.

A mind full of pockets of nothing,
memories riddled with h les,
thoughts bro ken and fra g mented,
sentences that. before the period,
conversations becoming snippets of words.

Communication ... not my ... suit.

Author's Note

there are no errors that are not intentional here (that I know of)

Reviews

[Amelie]

Awesome structure you got there. Experimental in the safest sense. The first line pulled off the everything else though it seemingly sounded a bit awkward for others. But it didn't let the piece suffer, there's a perfect resonance and your inventiveness was damn sick.

[ForeverNever]

Wow...took my breath away...very [what's the word]...insightful, I do believe.
Beautiful.

[Laura Maidah]

"A mind full of nothing pockets"? It's my revision. It's more concise. It's so short, and you can't afford the extra words. The format is very inventive. The fragmented thoughts are PERFECT in aesthetic placement and thematic delivery. Well done! I like the "s" and "csh" sounds that you kept up in repetition. Makes it a nice mental pronounce.

[w]

Thank you for the review that was obviously well thought out.

[Laura Maidah]

np