belief

free write

Eating the mind of the mindless drones who drone on about their beliefs when they believe in nothing but money

Author's Note

This is a free write. No forethought went into this.

Reviews

[Laura Maidah]

We are all lemmings whining about middle-class pain and writing 2deep4u2getMe. It's very true. Static feel. Nice alliteration. The plural sounds and aural motif is wonderful.

[Corset]

scathing, honest and unfortunately probably very true.

[Wondering Mind]

Very nicely done.

[MOON]

Clever and so true.

[Keith]

It took me two readings to fully grasp the depth of this little piece. For a free write this is powerful. I am impressed.

[K.J. Bryen]

Wish it were longer and emphasized your point more... but I love the repetition of "mind," "drone," and "belief" in the sentence you do have

[J. J. Nightingale]

Hummmm .. Ok


Jazz . :)

[Jackson Lai]

Short but good......