This poem you made is my favorite. Primarily because it describes what I myself am going through right now.
I love it for someone finally found the words to these feelings, but I also hate it because it strikes a cord within that hollow part.
Now I need to escape your sorrowful yet beautiful poem.
This is terrific conceptually. Now expand, please? Maybe some images? Cars turning on in the morning. Sheets a mess. Is there make-up on her face? Blue-lights from the TV still flickering on the walls? These are cr@ppy examples of images, but I'm just improvising. Thanks for a great read!
The somber, almost fearful, tone the poem was written in is amazing. Great job to truly pain the sorrow of emptyness after the beauty. Very well written.
This poem you made is my favorite. Primarily because it describes what I myself am going through right now.
I love it for someone finally found the words to these feelings, but I also hate it because it strikes a cord within that hollow part.
Now I need to escape your sorrowful yet beautiful poem.
I climb inside my mind through the windows to the soul that I sold for a kiss in the fourth grade.
I write about the adventures I have in my schizophrenic mind and the scars that my past has left. .. more..