A Lie

The truth doesn't always set you free

She was fifteen and pregnant.

He was twenty and screwed

because she told him

it was his

since she didn't 

want anyone to know

it was her

daddy's.

Reviews

[NaomiJim]

I did not expect the ending. Well done for surprising me.

[Dove]

dam that was a twisted ending. Well done

[Jordan A. Wilson]

abrupt twist of an end. it resonates

[Bare trees]

Holy crap, that was quite an ending. Well done and a little scary.

[w]

Thank you very much.

[Destinyxi]

Short. Nice ending. Good write

[GunMetal]

Direct and dark. Excellent as usual.

[Amila Jay]

Very raw!! Great write :))

[Laura Maidah]

because/because repeats. The ending is so gruesome and I just ate. Thanks. It's great.

[w]

Changed. Didn't even notice it.

[Laura Maidah]

I like "since". Works.

[w]

I am glad I have your approval.

[That_Girl]

Very true. Horrible things people do... well written though.

[Lily Mae]

Raw and powerful as usual.. you have a way of bringing that raw truth to light.. xo