Witchcraft

Just a poem I randomly wrote in my spare time.

Love is blind, they say,

But love also makes you blind,

Strangling the innocent mind,

Illusions are what the eyes will see,

Losing grip of yourself and reality,

A slave to what the heart dictates,

Never thinking of what awaits,

Doing anything,

Doing everything,

To make it last forever,

In a fairytale world that ends,

Happily ever after,

And never looking back to remember,

How many have you killed,

How many have you fooled,

The precious opportunities wasted,

The promises you stated,

Forgetting everything else,

Even to think of your poor self,

All for her.

Reviews

[Faffy]

Wow you real lack credit on this piece.....

and ill tell you why:

first of all your title makes me want to read your work

secondly,after i finished reading i though to myself "holy s**t"

and thirdly the content of this poem made me jealous that i didnt think of it first

basically what im trying to say is that u have got some really amzing stuff here and if you stop writing im going to hunt you down =)

write on!

-Roshan

[Kyra]

Why thank you. I promise I shall not stop. I dont want to be hunter ;D

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Reception good, conforms to regulations, great job.

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Kyra,

I liked the rhyme, curious why it stopped in some places.
Regardless blistering real.

Alot and even more if you were curious

Always,

Matthew
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