This is about, well, many things. I don't tell you, because I think it's for the reader to decide what this is about, and most importantly, what it means....
One of the only poems I've writen, as I've only writen a few. I do really like it, except the title, if anyone can think of a better one, please let me know. Hope you enjoy.
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hmm I think it could use better flow, going from short lines to long ones to short ones again kind of takes away from that. But Otherwise I think this is a great poem, with a great message.
Another title could be "they are beautiful" because of the repetition (very effective by the way), although I have title issues myself.
hmm I think it could use better flow, going from short lines to long ones to short ones again kind of takes away from that. But Otherwise I think this is a great poem, with a great message.
Another title could be "they are beautiful" because of the repetition (very effective by the way), although I have title issues myself.
A place, far, far away in the distant land of...., RI
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Hello all,
I'm just getting into the world of writting, now I'm practically writting all the time.
I get inspired with Music, mostly Coldplay, Daughtry, and Adam Lambert (okay, Adam doesn't help me.. more..