++overshod++

in these heavy shoes
it requires little effort
to go down the hill
all the way to the bottom

in these heavy shoes
i think that you'll find
it's the getting back up
that causes the problems

Reviews

[The Refined Poet]

This is an excellent poem. I appreciate how you used the same objects "heavy shoes" to show different perspectives. Beauty in brevity, as they say.

[Lily Mae]

That's the truth..xo