++passing++

Sepia image clutched in gnarled fingers. At last he sleeps.

Author's Note

entry for Adara's 6-10 word story contest

Reviews

[E.V. Black]

I know the story contest! I was about to enter it myself. Unfortunately, all my short "stories" are under the poem category.

This is a very sad and wistful entry. In my mind's eye, I can imagine him drifting into a passing, much like sleep, and being absolved of all of his pain.

[PyroKitty24]

A much larger story can be found behind that. Nicely done

[Inyourshadow]

Brevity and depth in 10 words, a faded photograph welcoming him home is a wonderful image and a beautiful notion that this may be one of his most treasured posessions. keep em' coming

[Lilly Negoi]

just the perfect number of words to birth goosebumps...

[Crowley]

Aggghhhhh....thats a ripper in the shortest amount of space ever....damnation, that was pointed, in more ways then one. Great write.

[Ruth]

Brilliant! Sepia brings home the old looking type world kind of feeling...suits this wonderfully love xx