++morning++

hesitant morning
silver light
through dirty glass

she rises a breath
bare feet whisper
on cold hardwood

waking eye follows
her ivory form
moving in silence

throws back her head
sable brush soft
paints on alabaster

Reviews

[E.V. Black]

My, this was absolutely beautiful. I read it through more than once to fully soak in the beauty of it. It becomes even more understandably beautiful with each reading. This very much reminds me of a haiku, only longer. Fairly short but wonderfully encompassing the beauty of whatever it is describing.

Very lovely! I admire your hand.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

soft silk of emotional visual~ a photograph that lingers~ imprints long after the corporeal image moves one~

[masqued_muse]

This is almost surreal, scary. Just haunting..There is a fragility in this scene, innocence being the seducer...I love it, of course...

[Lilly Negoi]

"sable brush soft/ paints on alabaster" - this kinda staggered me...

[Coyote Poetry]

The words create a beautiful vision. I like the gentle pace of the poem. Thank you for sharing this amazing poem.
Coyote

[KimLove "The Beautiful ..]

You write a beautiful picture, very lovely. : )

[Poetic-Theorem]

Wonderful imagery, great concise writing, your short lines works very well here, painting many images, Excellent work, David

[Ruth]

Beautiful piece! I am immersed in the shimmer in this!
The conciseness to this is amazing also...wonderful!
xx