++morning++

hesitant morning
silver light
through dirty glass

she rises a breath
bare feet whisper
on cold hardwood

waking eye follows
her ivory form
moving in silence

throws back her head
sable brush soft
paints on alabaster

Reviews

[E.V. Black]

My, this was absolutely beautiful. I read it through more than once to fully soak in the beauty of it. It becomes even more understandably beautiful with each reading. This very much reminds me of a haiku, only longer. Fairly short but wonderfully encompassing the beauty of whatever it is describing.

Very lovely! I admire your hand.

[joshua deathdealer]

This is wonderful. One of my favorites from you..xx

[Inyourshadow]

sable brush soft paints on alabaster ~ beautiful image of hair cascading over milk white neck and shoulders as every hint of movement captured forever in the haze of morning eyes taking in the beauty of the moment one frame at a time. Lovely, keep em' coming

[An owl on the moon]

There is a waking wonder here.. beautiful essence of dawn come to life in silken shadows..

[Tkess]

I really enjoyed the last stanza. Wonderful imagery.

[Kerry O'Connor]

This is absolutely gorgeous imagery - a clear winner in any forum.

[Crowley]

Can't believe you were peeking in my window....lol. Great image, gracefully seductive and wildly imaginative. Nice work. Congrats.

[JelliFyshKissUs]

Unbelievable what a bare woman walking across the room has you create with an inked mind. The first and last stanza are my absolute favorite. Their choppy thought sticks on my heart for some reason. I love simple thought being elaborated on in an elegant poem. Superb.

[OT]

nice visuals - scenic - you paint a picture - the ivory form and alabaster - contrasted withe the sable - I like

[Raven Starhawk]

It paints a exquisite line between emotion and physical.