Twisted Mind

Sleepy voice is awaken again,

telling me to join it in spreading despair,

whispering softly, telling me lies,

making me forget about long lost eyes.

weeping, calling

Deadly wish, long forgotten dream,

all but one lingering in me,

the voice is now tough, cruel and restless,

wanting me to fade into it's blackness.

screaming, scaring

Slowly i am loosing control,

lingering softly, trying to hold on,

the voice is now stronger than before,

I'm trying to break free...

Wait... Something is wrong...

despairing, falling

I realize it now i can not escape,

the voice is only in my head,

i have no where to hide, i'm defenseless,

the voice is mine, i went senseless.

twisting, turning

Is there something wrong with my mind?

I can not believe i got lost inside,

no longer able to distinguish myself,

just guided blindly by deception.

disturbing, inverting

I am now just a shadow from the past,

formed from lies, cries and tries,

only a scarecrow broken inside,

my name is simply Twisted Mind...

Reviews

[Chris]

Expressing yourself in a non-native language is an added level of difficulty. Word usage and tense are often giveaways. The emotional content of this shall find empathy within your listeners.

[Scarlett]

When emotions take over and they become this strong grammar stops being important, words just come pouring out. Writing in english makes my work reach more people, maybe someone in the same situation i was when i wrote this will be able to relate and see that things aren't always as dark as they seem.