eddies in the current

Ever have one of those lives...?

for unseen reasons

punctuated by mayhem

life flows quietly

Author's Note

The disorder is intentional...
In turmoil, I seem to be. Like to get my head above water in a calm piece of water again, I think would be nice.

Reviews

[Mark]

I've read two of your pieces thus far, and Haiku seems to be a preferred style for you. May I recommend my, "Three At Lunch", "Stillness", and "Catalogged"? If you are not acquainted with them, might I also refer you to Sal Buttace and Nancy Schrader, who write extensively in the Haiku metier?