focus on the touch - an 'a-bridgey-ment'

a haiku abridgment of Left Field Bridgey's work, "Focus on the Touch"

our private music

your body my instrument

how I love to play

Author's Note

A haiku abridgment of Left Field Bridgey's work, "Focus On The Touch," because I absolutely lack his boldness.
As with any adaptation, most will agree - the book was better... :)

Reviews

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Though short, I really like EVERY SINGLE WORD you chose to use! Knowing that you're married and you find my work to be "bold", I still love how you used "OUR" private music. That really struck a "chord with me"(like the pun?) at first read! Good write, and I'm glad my write influenced this!