horror

God, save my family from such a day...

parent's worst nightmare

freak accident takes a child

unexpressible

Author's Note

I've just been asked to pray for a family that lost their 10-year old son in a meaningless accident. I can't even imagine the horror and I desperately want not to. God, save my family from such a day, or, if not, do the unexplainable and give me peace.

Reviews

[Hayame]

You just summed up one of my worst fears in haiku form.

[Bexers]

This was a fantastic haiku!
From being so short, it really expressed a lot of emotion in the few words you used.

Keep it up!

[The Reticent Receptioni..]

wow. this is. it takes a special talent to make haiku's so powerful. good work.