wonder

wonder

A Poem by Mason Vail
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Size matters... not.

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molecules forming

vastness of the universe

either way - wonder

© 2009 Mason Vail


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Great haiku! I really like the whole idea of the haiku and how you started off with something so small (molecules)and went to something so big (universe)....I love the ending, too. Whether the universe is big or small, it is a great place.... Thanks for sharing!! Good luck in the contest!! :)
-Alaska Frost

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Great haiku! I really like the whole idea of the haiku and how you started off with something so small (molecules)and went to something so big (universe)....I love the ending, too. Whether the universe is big or small, it is a great place.... Thanks for sharing!! Good luck in the contest!! :)
-Alaska Frost

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Macro and the Micro universe-each wondrous beyond comprehension- Enjoyed this short piece- a very good haiku.


my warmest
bob

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the silence before after and between. this is what makes everything larger than it truly is. the universe and reality is always expanding. thank you for the food for thought.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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These words are vast in their brevity. I love poems about wonder. It is a big topic--but too many words would kill it.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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A writing poser if ever there was one. A dabbler, perhaps, if one is feeling generous. I am (or was) a computer scientist / biologist doing cell and tissue simulation R&D. For no good reason, I f.. more..

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