“Your World’s....Ending”

This is a poem that I wrote last night, about my girlfriend.....its about how uncertain everything is right now and it feels like everything is falling apart......

Time means nothing
When your world is ending.....
You sit there, shaking, crying
Afraid to know the truth
To see her dying flames

Wishing it all to go away
But its the same every day
You can’t scare it away

It’s raining, it’s pouring,
Everything starts spinning
As if...........we’re splitting.
To walk away?
Or stay anyway?

A choice she might have make
To what path to take

Knowing If she walks
Your heart will ache
Like it was all a mistake
And you’ll finally break........

Author's Note

I would love to hear your thoughts and comments of this poem! I’m always looking to improve!

Reviews

[Laz K.]

"Afraid to know the truth
To see her dying flames
Wishing it all to go away
But its the same every day
You can’t scare it away"

These lines really sum up the feelings that accompany the dying days of a relationship that was/is important. I can relate very much, and I'm glad, in a weird way, to know I'm not the only one to have to experience such pain and turmoil.

[Willow Wild]

I’m so glad you could relate so much! Yes, truly we’re never alone even if we think we are.