The walls are suddenly too close
and she can't breathe (Why can't she breathe??) Oh God, Oh God, she
whispers. She's cold, too cold. But yet something beautiful is
happening. She's getting what she's always wanted: Death.
Hi Kristen. I'm sorry I have not reviewed you in a while. I think a good title would be Final Seconds, Last Breath, What She Wanted, or something along those lines.
Kristen.....when I read pieces like this from you, it makes me worry. Are these just the thoughts that flow through your head or are you seriously considering this. Yes, I know we all have our good days and our bad days but don't let life get to you like this.
On a more positive note, this is saturated with passion and fear and truth. Truth that life is not a cup of tea and that dangerous actions lead to terrible consequences. Wonderful.
And I hope your aunt rests in peace.
Feel better Kristen.
Hi Kristen. I'm sorry I have not reviewed you in a while. I think a good title would be Final Seconds, Last Breath, What She Wanted, or something along those lines.
Kristen.....when I read pieces like this from you, it makes me worry. Are these just the thoughts that flow through your head or are you seriously considering this. Yes, I know we all have our good days and our bad days but don't let life get to you like this.
On a more positive note, this is saturated with passion and fear and truth. Truth that life is not a cup of tea and that dangerous actions lead to terrible consequences. Wonderful.
And I hope your aunt rests in peace.
Feel better Kristen.
Hey. I used to be on here alot when I was 15. Now, not so much. I'm 18 now and I'm not nearly as depressing as I used to be, but still depressing enough. Message me and feel free to read my old poems... more..