I
never knew that this was the day; the day that my dear aunt would
choose to pass away. I wish her well, I hope she's resting in peace.
Even if it means that she's gone and down with the deceased.
My cousin's mother died today. My closest aunt. It hit me a few days ago before it happened that I might never hear her voice again. And now I know that I wont. Ever. Only in the replayed memories of her in my head. And that's the saddest feeling of all. I loved her laugh, the funny way she talked. Everything. We miss you and love you and we will see you again one day.
Please read it, and tell me what you think. I guess you can say it was just something that came to me while I was thinking.
My Review
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To lose the family we are close to. It breaks our hearts. I'm sorry for your loss. We need to write down the good days we spend with them in story. The memories needs to be remembered later in our life of the great people who loved us.
Coyote
I'm sorry that you lost your aunt. I know how you feel because my uncle died...from cancer...but we didn't know what day he was going to die...he had a rare cancer...and it was very hard for everyone to see him suffering...but we didn't expect him to die the day he did...which was March 20th, 2009...this was sad either way...so I'm very sorry.
Losing a faimlile member no matter who she or he are is a pain.
I can feel your sadness in that day, no matter in your poem or aurthor note. Feel really sorry for this, hope you will smile the other day soon.
I'm very sorry. I wish you and the family the best. I know it must be very hard for you and your family. It's a good poem though. You put it together nicely, short but good. Keep up the great work. I wish you the best.
~Bridget~
I know exactly how you feel, I cried myself to sleep when my Great-Grandmother passed away, I know the date and I know the exact time at which she left, very touching poem my dear. :)
To lose the family we are close to. It breaks our hearts. I'm sorry for your loss. We need to write down the good days we spend with them in story. The memories needs to be remembered later in our life of the great people who loved us.
Coyote
Hey. I used to be on here alot when I was 15. Now, not so much. I'm 18 now and I'm not nearly as depressing as I used to be, but still depressing enough. Message me and feel free to read my old poems... more..