Forbidden Heat

Your hands remind me of the one thing that I must confess

As they roam over my back, legs, hips, and my chest

Your tongue massaging mine in my mouth drives me insane

Makes me want to cry out the Lord’s name in vein

Who knows how I’ll even begin to try to hide this hickie on my neck

What I do know, though, is that tonight I’ll be going home a wreck

With vigor, you rip my panties apart in the heat

And I run my tongue across your lips, it tastes so sweet

Pushing into me, you force me higher up against the wall

I cry out and push back and you descend backward and fall

Lamps are broken, clothes are ripped apart and strewn across the floor

You have me in a fit, biting into your shoulder, screaming for more

This can't be happening, I can't believe were doing this

Who knew doing wrong could be so much bliss

I'm hyperventilating now, surrendering to this sentiment of passion

We both cry out in ecstasy and come together in the filthiest of fashion

I smile, I doubt I'll ever forget this pretty picture

Despite the insults we'll get from other people, a painful sort of stricture.

 

 

Author's Note

Let me just say that someone told me that this was blatant and at first I was annoyed but I then I re-read it over and grasped the definition behind the word "Blatant". I didn't realize it was but now I do, and I did it on purpose. I'm not really into the whole idea of covering up things in my poems. It's just not my style. It annoys the hell out of me.

But anyways, tell me what you think.

Reviews

[bluessadmood]

So this is the first of its kind you ever write..
i swear i almost knew this..for this was written to be like an erotica
this was written like being put in a position you never expected and things got out of hand ha ha
the going insane and the wild cry ,and the mess you will end up with while leaving
and what to tell those you will see..this was great,very exciting to read
i never read erotica,but this was so different..its a lovely story
how in life we could go crazy and wild..yes lets learn everything,ha ha
lovely write..

[Alex Thomas]

Well, your mixed feelings parallel those of the subject within the poem. So wrong that a tinge feels right. I wouldn't change a thing.

[David W Moore III]

I need a cold shower now. Shouldn't try doing reviews like this at work ;)

[nono]

~///~ I blush while reading this...hehe I like it very very lovey dovey cute!

[Bridget Mcmaken]

This is a very good poem! I don't think you need to change anything, it's good the way that it is. The poem flows nicely. I love it!! Keep up the great work.