This Hell

Hell is burning the soles of my feet. It's destroying my insides, trying to find a way out. The fire wont stop until it has swallowed me and everyone I hold close to my heart. But yet, I can't seem to stare this contemptuous form of evil in the face.

Reviews

[InsanityWriter]

Amazing. So much imagery ins those three lines... Perfect. :)

"I can't seem to stare this contemptuous form of evil in the face."

Probably my favorite part ^^^ ... Along with all the rest of it though. ;) Great work!!

[(JR) Joshua Hernandez]

wow, great poem, short and sweet

[M.A. Van Dyke]

Lol, do you have plantars warts? Sorry, I shouldn't have said that, but if you think about it, it kind of (kind of) makes sense...

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a really good poem. Good job....its sad though...

[Ruth]

Hell is a powerful image for the emotions :)
A potent poem love, life is not always a journey of roses!
xx

[Coyote Poetry]

Hell can seem pretty powerful. Easy to dance with the devil. Hard to stay on the right road. A powerful poem. A lot of decision must be made in a life. Better to try to stay on the right roads. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Cynthia]

What a powerful image behind!
I don't know how should I explain my feeling in this feeling,
all I can tell is
A Great

[heich]

wow...powerful.

[KL]

It seems unfinished, and I say this only because it's a little too basic. I think you should go more indepth.

[Jonathan De Elvira]

Yeah...
very powerful images you have there...
Flame ftw...