Twisted Revenge

You'll pay for what you did...

Twisted Revenge

 

 

 

 

She slashes her arms

She slashes her wrists

 

She smiles,

She’s swimming in the wrong kind of bliss.

 

She’s careful to leave her house,

As quiet as a mouse

 

So she doesn’t disturb anyone,

Her laugh echoes through the trees;

This ought to be fun.

 

The people on the street stop and stare

But she doesn’t seem to care

 

For she has a mission

A frustrating decision

 

To keep him or to let him go?

She’s not used to loving someone so.

 

He hurt her, he really did

He made her feel useless, a mere kid.

 

Blood trails behind her as she walks

A boy across the street can’t help but gawk.

 

Who is this lady, he wonders, and what’s her deal?

But he tells no one he saw her. He keeps his lips sealed.

 

She’s almost there now, the desired destination

Once she’s there she’ll be happy, she’ll be floating in elation.

 

The look he’ll get…the play of emotions on his face

She shouldn’t want to see him hurt, she should be disgraced.

 

But she’s not

She wants so badly for him to rot.

 

Though, the bigger part of her feels sad

She clings to the feelings deep inside

That makes her crazy, mad.

 

Finally, she’s there now, she knocks, he opens the door

He’s shocked, but that’s not enough, she wants more.

She holds out her wrists, home to never ending

Bruises as far as the eye can see.

 

She looks up at him with watery eyes

She says, “Look what you’ve done to me”.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Sorry if it sucks. Or depresses you.

My emotions have been all I'm writing nowadays.

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was very powerful..it makes me feel when I slit my wrists last year...I was glad I was able to stop myself from doing that...in my opinion if someone ever did that to me I wouldn't fight back...I'd just let them keep cutting me...because it will make me feel better...I cut myself...so someone else cutting me doesn't bother me...abusing me would be a different story...I would fight back because I wouldn't be able to take it...I think this was good though...thanks for sharing...

[JelliFyshKissUs]

Oh how I love the last line. Just wraps the story up so perfectly. Men--hmph! What jerks. And we women allow them to pull on our strings. The words were very deeply felt. Her pain was immense in this piece. But nothing in this write compares to the line: "She's swimming in the wrong kind of bliss." Oh how I wish I had came up with that. Thank you for sharing this with me.

[Cynthia]

It's not suck at all, well, I think it's a nice done work!
I haven't ever try writing this kind of topics, it's really cool to me!! Heartbreaking is tough, you surly get all the emotions out as I think. I think it's really okay for what you think and what you write.
Nice Work!! Keep Up The Good Work!

[red_saphyre]

I have wanted to do this many times. to let people see how they make me feel. but i have realized how horrible that would be. Very well written. Keep up the good work.

[EverEmma]

Heartbreaking but with a slightly maliciousness sense to it. Very good. Your emotions are like a slash of red paint. Bold and defining. If this is what you are doing in real life please refrain yourself! :D