What I like about you

What I like about you

 

 

 

~

His smile:

 

It makes my day.

 

 

His lips:

 

Such sweet candy display. I wonder what they taste like.

 

 

His hands:

 

A magical force all on its own. They work miracles.

 

 

His touch:

 

Leaves a tingling sensation, a burning trail of heat behind on my skin. Like a mark, its own personal imprint.

 

 

His gaze:

 

A sensual festivity. It penetrates my very core and leaves me breathless, gasping for air.

 

 

Him:

 

Simply…

 

…perfect…

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

I know this ends a little bit too quickly so I MIGHT add some later on. At the moment, I just can't think of anything else. Tell me what you think. (:

Reviews

[JelliFyshKissUs]

Some poems should be short and sweet. When you force yourself to come up with more, the new thoughts will not naturally fuse with the previous writing that came to you so automatically. This had a feeling that needed to be short in order to hit so hard. Thanks for sharing.

[Ruth]

A beautiful tribute to "him" love :)
Flows lovely with lush imagery :)
xx

[Cassiopia Summers]

Doll, this is perfect. Describing Him very well. (: I love it.

[Cynthia]

I love this relly much!
I love how you describe the character
inside this poem.
Nice Work!!

[(JR) Joshua Hernandez]

wow, very nice very nice

[Forever Mine]

I like the descriptions....

[Kesha]

Very sweet, and nice descriptive words :)

[KaySea]

very nice

[Jocelin]

This is awsome but who is it to?

[Sports Girl]

sweet. i loved it. nicely done