Peace Treaty

Defeated.

Peace Treaty

~

Cover your ears, don't make a sound

Let's get ready for the next round

Be strong, don't put up a fight

Surely, this will be a horrific sight

No interfering, show no signs of fear

Life was never that easy, my dear

Await your death, put down your weapons

Your life will be over in seconds.

 

Author's Note

This is how I'm feeling. So, this is what I wrote.

Reviews

[Cassiopia Summers]

I like the poem, however I see one error in spelling, which is quite alright.
"done" in the second to last line should actually be "down"
My favorite lines are-
"Be strong, don't put up a fight
Surely, this will be a horrific sight
No interfering, show no signs of fear
Life was never that easy, my dear"

Poems that are straight from emotion are, in my opinion, the best.
I think you did well with this poem.

[EverEmma]

Death is peace itself, no struggles from the crazy, maniacal, insane, confusing ways of life. You capture moments before death in almost a slow-mo video. The only thing I can say about you is that you hold alot of anger and passion, I mean that in the nicest way possible, no rudeness intended. I've said it once and I shall say it again, it's what makes you brilliant Kristen. This is great. A wonderful piece once again. :)



Your friend and fellow writer,

-::-EverEmma-::-

[(JR) Joshua Hernandez]

wow, interesting good job

[Andrew Wright]

I'm feeling the same way... Have you seen my facebook status? we're definitely riding the same wavelength... I'll post it soon... "secrets" so you can see

[Alex Thomas]

Great flow, rhyme, rhythm. There tone is almost seducing and temptation. Assuring you that death is easier than life. Suicide is for quitters, life is much for exciting. Don't give up without giving it all that you've got.

[Cynthia]

That's true!!!!!!!!
The Flow is really good, flow nice...
Nice Job!