Peace Treaty

Defeated.

Peace Treaty

~

Cover your ears, don't make a sound

Let's get ready for the next round

Be strong, don't put up a fight

Surely, this will be a horrific sight

No interfering, show no signs of fear

Life was never that easy, my dear

Await your death, put down your weapons

Your life will be over in seconds.

 

Author's Note

This is how I'm feeling. So, this is what I wrote.

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Awe this was really sad. I really hope you don't have this feeling anymore. I know how it is to be this way though. Thanks for sharing.

[Kelly Taylor]

It's short but power-packed with awesome emotion. I can definitely feel what you're going through just by reading this; it's one of my favorite poems of yours.

[Jocelin]

i can feel all f the hatred it hurts me that your like this.

[Cheyenne]

Its dark and i can tell your in a dark mood and i like it alot!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Wow. A lot of anger in your words. The words were direct and to the point. I like the ending. Someone maybe in some deep trouble. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[KaySea]

very nice

[Ruth]

A poignantly honest write love!
Saddening and tense, beautifully done!
xx

[Kesha]

This is amazing! I love it! :)

[Sports Girl]

I loved this a lot. Great job. You always surprises me in a good way.

[Gianna Perry]

Love this. Absolutely love it. New favorite :) It's got a great flow to it, the rhyme and rhythm are perfect, the vocabulary is fitting for the topic... you've never ceased to amaze me, Kristen. Another fantastic piece.

~STR