I'm sorry

I’m Sorry

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I'm sorry I wasn't good enough.

I'm sorry for the stress I caused you.

I'm sorry that I was so vulnerable, so

Easy to break.

I'm sorry I was ever in your life.

I'm sorry you had to meet someone like me.

I'm sorry for making everything worse than

It needed to be.

I'm sorry for bringing up things from the past.

I'm sorry that I can't get over what you did to me.

I'm sorry I can't quite get over you yet, move on.

I'm sorry that I still cry sometimes, upon remembering

All the good times we had together.

I'm sorry you had to lie.

I'm sorry you felt you needed to protect me.

I'm sorry I wasn't nice enough, pleasant enough,

Smart enough to hold your attention.

I'm sorry you like her more.

I'm sorry she doesn't know you exist.

I'm sorry you're in love with someone who

doesn't talk to you as much as I do.

I'm sorry I couldn't spot the signs.

I'm sorry I didn't see it coming.

I'm sorry you're not mines anymore.

I'm sorry you disapointed me as most of my friends do.

I'm sorry that you've moved on, and that you

can only see me as a little sister.

But most of all,

I'm sorry for you.

The one thing I'm not sorry for is that

you were ever in my life to begin with.

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Author's Note

I wrote this a year ago for this guy named Justin. Never gave it to him, though.

He's a jerk, anyways,.

I know the repeat of "I'm sorry" is pretty annoying but I have no other way to do it. Tell me what you think.

Reviews

[Kelly Taylor]

The repitition of "I'm sorry" isn't annoying at all; actually, it adds an apologetic atmosphere, which I'm assuming is what you were going for. I hope this "Justin" fella realizes how much he hurt you, 'cause even I realize it just from reading this.

[(JR) Joshua Hernandez]

very good poem, awesome job, I like it!!

[KaySea]

wow. i loved this poem!

[Alex Thomas]

I enjoy the repeating refrain. It adds some stability to this poem. Did you mean 'mine' in the middle? It's good that you realize something about someone like that.

[Cassiopia Summers]

I think the repeat of "I'm Sorry" is what makes the poem great. The repetition shows the emotion you are trying to show, you did a good job a year ago. Wonderful.

[Gianna Perry]

I completely agree with Angela. Don't waste your time on a person like that, as difficult as it will be to walk away from him. The repetitve language is only reinforcing the idea, not terribly annoying. Overall, a good write.

~Shayna R.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a sad poem. You should never love a guy that makes you feel that way. It was hard for them to accept you, but don't worry about that person. You will be loved again. Thanks for sharing. :)