Jealousy, Part Two

Jealousy,

              Part Two  

 

 

 

Whispering sweet nothings in her ear

Assuring her that you care

Telling her that you need her more than anything

I wish you’d just stop it for my well being

But then, that would be selfish of me, wouldn’t it?

I’d feel guilty, depressed, the whole bit

Though, this girl…she’s not even with you

Tell me what she has that I don’t, give me a clue.

You should be ashamed of yourself

This is just one more mistake to add to your mental shelf.

Sigh. Jealousy is a terrible thing

So, why am I still writing about it in this word string?

 

 

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Author's Note

Haha, I decided to make a part two to "Jealousy". This one is a bit different than the other one, though. Read "Jealousy" after you read this one, if you haven't read it yet. Tell me what you think of it. (:

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Jealousy is a hard topic. When I was young i would worry about the person. Need to know everything. Age taught me. Jealously and control will leave you alone and sad. Truth is the key. Forgiveness is the different in a good relationship. Few Angels are roaming this earth. I like the feel and the emotion of this poem. A very good ending to a outstanding poem. thank you.
Coyote

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This is a great poem. A lot of good emotions are written within the poem. I know how it is to be jealous, but everyone is going to be jealous some moments in life. I mean girls get jealous of other girls so often, but thanks for sharing. :)

[FocusedAmnesia]

Good read. I love the last line. Really ties the piece together.

[Cassiopia Summers]

I think it is good. It's great that you could change the points of view from the point of 'Jealousy' to that of 'Jealousy' the sequel.

[Cynthia]

Nice job!
Jealos, is really worst!

[Bridget Mcmaken]

Wow this is an awesome poem! I love it, you did a very nice job. Keep up the great work.

[(JR) Joshua Hernandez]

is good, really good, nice job