Suicide Note

He loves me? He loves me not?

The last petal falls and suddenly I’m hot.

Hot all over, the room is spinning,

I’m fighting to stay up, I’m certainly not winning

My legs are shaking,

My heart is aching

The knife is close, oh so very near

It’s right on the table; don’t you see it, dear?

Time is running out fast,

Rest assured, this breath will be my last

No one has to worry about me and my crap anymore

I’m sinking to my death, my blood decorating the floor

Then, when I die, Let us dance, darling, in the depths of this Hell

Our souls festering, burning, do not dwell

And then, finally, we shall break this venomous love spell.

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Please, keep in mind that this isn't a suicide note for myself. Thank you. Enjoy!

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I like this piece as well. I believe that you will become a published author one day as well. I know this was not for yourself, but it felt so real and it shows that you can connect with your audience. The way you wrote it made me feel like how the person was feeling. I liked this. I am going to put it in my favorites as well. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Rose Tyler]

This is great - show the anger the person thinking of suicide has for the love spell they're under, and how it shall be played out.

[watch_the_world]

i can feel the pain in it and its amazing, i can honestly say that I am jealous, I could never EVER right anything as beautiful as this.... wow... im out of words to describe how amazing this is. you should definitely get published, xD I would pay for your writing xD in like a book or something, pack your bags, youre going far. xD

[Blossom]

this is really good. so thought provoking and beautiful in many words.

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Kristen,

I would hope it is not for you, but I will have to say I love the ending. I really can't explain it right now, but it an excellent ending nonetheless.

Regards,

Matthew

[Cynthia]

That's sooo great!!!
Oh! You must become a writer!
Not joking!

[Cassiopia Summers]

Man. I could just read this over
and over
and over
and over
and over lol.
I think you get the point. Haha.

[Bridget Mcmaken]

Amazing work!!! I love it! awesome work.

[Cassiopia Summers]

Kristen, one day you will be a famous author, and when that day comes, I shall buy every poem, every book, and every story. This piece is great, and I love the fact that you write about so many things. This piece id definitely one of my favorites and shall be joining the others of yours that are my favorites in my favorites. (:

[Andrew Wright]

You really have talent Kristen. I applaud you in every piece you write.