Torture

Torture, my heart torn, a vanished self esteem all due to your twisted mind. The agony burns. Who's to blame for my destructive thoughts, the emptiness; mixed emotions? I'm sure you can answer this. You think you know pain, you think you know me? Bullshit.

Reviews

[Andrew Wright]

Your words leave an indentation on my heart, always promising to change me slightly throughout the course of my readings...

[1416]

Impressive; your word choice never ceases to surprise me. The way each poem straddles between such anger and such sadness shows your range in emotion. Nice.

[Alex Thomas]

Not in poetic format but definitely a poetic vibe to it. This is very powerful in self image and self respect. If it's based off experience, I'm apologizing.